Leviathin

[Steelinwood]

Hey guys, here's a link to my newest roller coaster! It's a B&M Standup called leviathin, so without further or do, here's a link to the video!:lol:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3xJ6rEcxFvQ

[mayoki]

Overall it was a good coaster, but there is a lot of room for improvement-

1. I'm not a big fan of the colors, try doing something a bit brighter(?)

2. You need to work on your smoothing.

3. In order to make your elements and transitions more intricate, I suggest you start making your vertexes smaller, so you have more control of what the ride is doing, if you know what I mean.

4. The banking. This is probably the biggest problem, especially coming out of the first dive loop. Once again, making your vertexes smaller can help you overcome this problem.

5. Scenery. Adding a lake, a few hills, and trees isn't absolutely necessary, but it only takes about five minutes once you get used to it and it makes your ride a lot more enjoyable.


6. After the MCBR the layout is pretty pointless, you should add some turns and a corkscrew or something like that, or take out the MCBR all together because it doesn't really do anything, you could let the ride keep its speed and it would get to the final brakes and through the block just as fast.

Hope this helps; I'm looking forward to seeing more of your coasters in the future. :)

[Steelinwood]

Thanks for you advice! :)

[coastermatt]

What is up with that ending? Pretty creepy...

[Michael]

It's alright, pacing was very gradual. Had alot of pumps, but nothing huge. Try smoothing it down a lot. Work on the colors a bit too.

^ And I agree... what the hell? :tongue:

[Steelinwood]

oh that's my sister, it's a joke for my coaster video things called Craze Coaster Productions.

[JD71]

^Wait.. what? I'm confused now...

[Steelinwood]

The ending was my sister, talking about roller coaster groups :)

[Jumpman23]

Work on your banking, remove your mcbr or add some more track, also the loop is way under supported.