Unnamed park

[Jumpman23]

I started this park a few months ago, and I just started to work on it again, and I figured I would show you guys what I have done so far.http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR228.BMP-copy.jpg
This is the parks launched Intamin Impulse, VOODOO the station music is Jimi Hendrix's Voodoo Child.http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR233.BMP.jpg
Jaguar the parks first inverted coaster.http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR234.BMP-copy.jpg
Lifthill of Jaguar.

I am still finishing the outer areas of the park the map size is 185x185 so I have been going at a very slow pace. comments and critizism greatly appreciated.

[Michael]

You should post in this forum a little more often :)

Great work, love the coasters. The realistic look is what gets me. Outstanding detail!

[Jman]

Quite refreshing, but your archy is repetitive. Try and give each building its own distict construction and style, much like you would see in real life. Right now, its pirate wall, poles, yellow window with black shutters for nearly all of the structures. Vary the textures, colors, etc, from building to building and it will look so much better.

Very promising stuff, looking forward to seeing more.

[Jumpman23]

^
Yeah I know my buildings are repetitive I am trying to work around the park but it is hard for me.

[Nate]

Doesn't look hard, the park looks great so far. I don't mind the buildings being the same for a little, as long as it is not the entire park. If an area has the same style buildings, it is no biggie. Try making them different heights and add a deck or something, just doing that spices it up enough.

[Jumpman23]

Michael: thanx
Nate: those screens are in the African section, that is why my buildings are all the same.

Update coming tomorrow.

[Sam]

Everything looks good except for in the second screen. The large footer in the water doesn't look very good. I recommend putting a standard round footer there, then zero-clearance the park to raise up the water level to submerse the footer. I also don't like those supports on the bridge in the middle of the second screen. Fix these two things and you're all good!

[Jumpman23]

^so how do you get the standard footer under water I am not understanding?

Also I dont have anyother scenery that would look good for the supports under the bridge.

[apsterling]

Lower that tile of water, add your standard footer, and enable Zero clearance in 8Cars, and raise the water.

Looks nice!

[Sam]

^ What he said. ;)

For the bridge, some standard blocks would look nice. Those points on what you have now just look odd.

[Jumpman23]

I worked on the problems you guys pointed out, it looks much better.

Now here is a preview of what is to come tomorrow.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR223.BMP.jpg

[disneylhand]

Those supports on that hill are nice but the footers would look better as quarter tile blocks connected instead of that cluster of round ones.

-disneylhand

[chris]

It reminds me of Apollos Chariot. I like this park. Good job.


EDIT- Trying to go with the Cedar Fairish paint scheme?

[Jumpman23]

Update #1

Here are more shots of Nitro B&M hyper.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR237.BMP.jpg
http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR238.BMP.jpg
http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR239.BMP.jpg
http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR240.BMP.jpg

More to come comments and crtitizism appreciated.

[Michael]

I really really really like the layout on this coaster :)

I'm glad to see the architecture varying now, it looks really nice so far. Keep up the good work!

[chris]

Good but 3 things I saw weird to me. \/

1. Get rid of the fences and add the cable ones or some shorter one.
2. Not liking the helix at the end.
3. Change the S bend. It wont work.

[Jumpman23]

^ What is wrong with the helix and what fence are you talking about the Queue fence or the path fence?

[Michael]

Not liking the helix at the end.


The helix is a high speed and high g maneuver that makes a good finalee and slows the train down before the brakes.

Keep it :)

[The Storm Runner]

I really like it! When I first took a glimpse at the track, I immediately thought "Nitro" even though the colors are a teensy bit different. Is that the whole ride though? Those three hills going out, turn around, two hills, helix, brakes? That's rather short... I do like the supports. :) Maybe just change a color in the station? Something other than gray gray beige gray would look better in my opinion. :)


^^3. What if there is another storage track right there?

[Jumpman23]

Michael: Thanx I put the helix there for what you said it rellay is a good finally and it slows the train down enough so the break run isnt so abrupt.

Storm Runner: Thanx, I am thinking of taking out some of those trees in the background and putting in some more track.

[chris]

The queue line fences. Also what is the chain doing? Sloped brakes?

[Jumpman23]

^ yes, the chain is going backwards so it slows the brake down abit.

[chris]

Can you private message me on how to do that?

[The Storm Runner]

I actually like the brown queue fences. :)

As for the brakes, if they're just normal chain lift pieces on a downward slant, sorry, they aren't slowing it down. But they do look good though. :) I say keep them. :)

[Jumpman23]

More progress

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR227.BMP.jpg

Here is the park's boardwalk.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR242.BMP.jpg

Edited some of the trackwork on Jaguar, I put in a double helix because the single helix I had caused alot of G's entering the helix.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR244.BMP.jpg

Sort've a sneak peek of the newest attraction, El Toro Loco.

[Nate]

It looks great, I'm really looking forward to this park.

[The Storm Runner]

Wow, all of that looks so good! I love the supports and terrain in the boardwalk. However, please do something with the checkerboard ground inside the awesome buildings. Jaguar looks really good as well; I love that double helix. Just, I think you should move the photo-op to somewhere low to the ground, cause it ruins the jungle look with the two smilies on sticks in the sky. El Toro Loco looks really good as well. :)

[Jumpman23]

Nate: thanx alot

Storm Runner: Thanx, I fixed the checkerboards and the phot section I moved it.

[Sam]

You might wanna fix that support crossing the track on Jaguar's loop so it doesn't mutilate the passing by train. ;)

[Jumpman23]

^ that support is not going through, it is just the angle of the screen.

Update soon.

[chris]

Could you show us an overveiw??? The park is amazing. Very good. Not liking Nitro though, it could be taller and longer. My opinion is to make it a double out and back. Meaning make it like Raging Bull.

http://cache.rcdb.com/pictures/picmax/p9599.jpg

Courtesy of rcdb.com Photo taken by Duane Marden

[Jumpman23]

Overview as requested.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR245.BMP.jpg

[chris]

Looks like your almost done! Looks cool.

[Michael]

I really like the look of the interconnected land areas by the boardwalks over the water. This is such a neat park! :)

[rollercoasterfreak91]

For the boardwalks, you might want to use diagonal path, they look very boxyish.

[Jumpman23]

^ I dont have diagonal paths

Chris: you talked me into making Nitro longer and bigger pictures soon.

[chris]

It would make the coaster more realistic.

[The Storm Runner]

Wow that looks good! The only thing I'm not too fond of is the black roofs. Maybe change some of them to other colors like the darker green, brown, and red? Also please change the colors of the building on the left side of the screen, by the rapids ride. I do like it though. :)

[Jumpman23]

New and improved Nitro.

trees were cleared behind Nitro.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR248.BMP.jpg

The first edition of track was a large bunny hill.
http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR249.BMP.jpg

And completed
http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR252.BMP.jpg

[Jumpman23]

Excuse the double post

Storm Runner: the building for the rapids ride is not black it has black stripes on it, so zoomed out it looks black.

[chris]

Awesome. Now it looks like a B&M hyper. Thanks for listening to my comment. A hammer head would of been great after the 3rd hill. But its your park.

[Jumpman23]

Small update

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR215.BMP.jpg

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[rcwhiz]

Not a big fan of that Flying Dutchman. But I really like Nitro except for the ending helix as it is too long and looks like it would pull too many G's and that small hill right after all the turns that connects those helix's back to the other part of the roller coaster but I am glad you made it longer as it was too short before. The other concern that I have is you use those poles on the top of your buildings way too much. Take some off and try something new there they look way to repetitive. Also I am not a big fan of your coasters going through waterfalls as that is not very realistic and IMO brings this park down a bit from how great it is and how realistic it is. Interested in that wooden coaster and B&M that's next to it. But otherwise this is a nice park. Keep up the good work.

[Jumpman23]

I wasnt trying to make the flying dutchman accurate, and what is wrong with the waterfall it goes with the foresty look of Jaguar; I will post more pics of the Beemer and the woody.

[geewhzz]

Nice looking park you have there.

[chris]

You trying to copy me on the B&M looper? It kinda looks like my Outlaw. Cool coasters? When do you expect to release it?

[Jumpman23]

Sometime in the middle of february I still have a lot of work to do.

[alpengeistfan1]

I don't know if anybody cares about this but do you have any flat rides in the park? It looks like most of your park is buildings and roller coasters. If you do have some flats, could you get use a pic? Thanks.

[Nate]

There are flat rides in most of the screens. Only the ones that focus on a coaster don't really show them

[Dan]

You trying to copy me on the B&M looper? It kinda looks like my Outlaw.Most B&M's look alike in many ways..all he has is a turn and a drop. Do you have that copyrighted?

It's a great start, I love Jaguar's station. However, the waterfall in the first screen does look out of place, I'd get rid of it.The B&M seems too heavily supported at the bottom to the middle of the lift.

Great job!

[chris]

I was just joking. His is probably 40-50 feet taller. The train house looks like mine. Same for the transfer. I like it. 2 thumbs up. More flats though.

[Jumpman23]

^ I have flats in the pics look closer, some are in the buildings.

[Jumpman23]

Sorry for not posting any updated work lately, I had finals today and last week, progress is going very slowly.

Update #3

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR220.BMP.jpg

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR222.BMP.jpg

Comments and critizism appreciated.

[vedved82491]

It's an interesting layout. I like the first element. It's just a bit odd that the MCBR comes so soon after the drop. Also, I may have missed this comment or question but are you keeping the footers the way they are? I know they aren't the easiest to work with but it looks odd when you have those base blocks three or four stacked upon each other.

[rollercoasterfreak91]

I would suggest lowering the terrain so you can fir another support piece on, it'll also give the area a more natural look. I like the onride photo.

[Jumpman23]

I have some empty space in the park and was wanting to get your guys feedback on what new attraction should be added to Hillvalley.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR254.BMP.jpg

I had a corkscrew coaster in the space, but it looked outdated compared to all of the new rollercoasters so I demolished it.

[Sam]

Here are some suggestions.

Dark ride of some kind.
Spinning coaster of some sort.
Water ride

[apsterling]

Water ride.

[Jumpman23]

I have decided to install my final coaster, one reason is because I already have two water coasters and a rapids ride. Two I dont have the spinning coaster and finally I wanted to make this type of coaster from the beginning so here is an update.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR264.BMP.jpg

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR266.BMP.jpg

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR268.BMP.jpg

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El Toro Loco is complete.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR270.BMP.jpg

Comments and critizism appreciated. Download will be up in a couple of weeks.

[Whisper]

They layout of that new coaster looks good so far. I like how you have the construction phases, but what I don't understand is why you placed them in random spots. B&M's have their rides built like; support, track, support track, etc. If it were an Intamin, it would work.

El Toro Loco looks nice, a bit inspired by Maverick I see. I don't really like the clashing of different land tiles. I would suggest adding some foliage in that area. In the queue, I think there are way too many TV's. Get rid of most of them, and spread them out more.

There are lots of glitches on your coaster. And if you want to get rid of that On-ride-photo thing, that is peeking through the wall, build the wall on the other side of the tile, that should get rid of it.

Overall, I think this park is turning out great. Just some few minor adjustments here and there, and you'll be off.

Good luck and have fun with it!

[Jumpman23]

Update.

Flying High is completed.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR289.BMP.jpg

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR286.BMP.jpg

Overview!

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR290.BMP.jpg

Yes I know that most of my buildings have black rooves, I dont feel like changing all of the roof colors so I amd not changing them.

[rollercoasterfreak91]

Very nice coaster, like how it goes over the line there, but I hate the name.

[Xtreme Descent]

Great park! :) I really like how your park's flying coaster goes over the path and line. I just don't like the name very much.

[Sam]

Cedar Fair quality names are not acceptable. ;)

I suggest you call it "Air Wave"

[R.C.]

^Except in your park, right?

I really like the flyer, I'm not sure that I really like the turn around in the first screen, I think that area is too bare. You could also put some trees around the rest of the coaster too. Besides that everything looks good.

[Jumpman23]

Another update:

El toro Loco was removed because of to much downtime.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR292.BMP.jpg

And another, yet even more fun ride was added in.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR295.BMP.jpg

The supports took forever on the lift.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR298.BMP.jpg

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR300.BMP.jpg

progress still coming along, Super Screamer will be done soon!

Comments and critisism appreciated.

[The Storm Runner]

That looks really good. Maybe change the grass to rocks? I'd never have the patience to do all that lol. :thumbup1: It looks very good. :smile:

[Jumpman23]

Here is sortve a teaser, havent been able to work on the park much, because of weightlifting and all.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR340.BMP.jpg

HUGE! update tonight or tomorrow.

[ThrillsChills]

Good job on the log flume, really did great on the theme to it.

[Jumpman23]

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR330.BMP.jpgHere some more pictures of my progress. Four new coasters!

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR5.BMP.jpg

Hillvalley's new B&M floorless, Bronco.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR1.BMP.jpg

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR10.BMP.jpg



Super Screamer, surrounding area not complete yet.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR330.BMP.jpg

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR2.BMP.jpg

Outrun got new track and a new station.

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR3.BMP.jpg

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR8.BMP.jpg

http://usera.imagecave.com/Jumpman23/SCR15.BMP.jpg

And I will leave you with what is to come, Serpent. I forgot to save from my last update so that is why so many of the old coasters in the previous updates are gone, I had to start all over.

Comments and crtisism appreciated.

[The Storm Runner]

Yeah, I really like the flume as well. :smile:

Three suggestions however:

1. Change the paths by the entrance of the flume. Right now it's centered around the exit, not the entrance. Maybe add two more path tiles to make it even and not so off-centered?

2. Fix up the path confusion by the red-roof building and the coaster's supports and footers. It's just weird-looking, in my opinion.

3. On the red-roofed building, move the windows up one notch - they look kinda droopy.

Other than that, everything looks great! I love the ways you've broken up the midway with the land tiles and elevation change. It looks really good. :smile:

[coastermatt]

Thats look great, thrills AND theming? Way to go!

[Jumpman23]

Storm Runner- Thanks I get that fixed I didnt even realize those mistakes until you mentioned it.

Vekomatt- thanks man.

[Jumpman23]

Well ihave decided to CANCEL the park, I rushed it a liitle to much and there is so much stuff that I didnt fell like going tback into and putting more detail in, so Expect a download tomorrrow or Sunday. thanks to those people that followed through out the updates and helped me.

P.S. I have already started a new more detailed park, pics tomorrow.